Thursday, August 18, 2011

I can

I can hug you
like I want to hug forever
I can kiss you
like it is my best one ever

I can hold you
like I'd never let you go
I can talk to you
like I want to say everything I know

I can be what I am
like I don't know how to pretend
I can give my time to you
like to the time, there is no end

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8 comments:

  1. Nitin MahajanAugust 19, 2011 at 12:09 AM

    ooooooo

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  2. Nitin MahajanAugust 19, 2011 at 12:09 AM

    oooooooooo

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  3. Shams Noorur Rehman FarooqiAugust 19, 2011 at 3:45 AM

    Ah!!! Mamma scribbles.... WOW,, Great....

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  4. AnonymousAugust 19, 2011 at 3:58 AM

    Loved it :)

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  5. deepsAugust 19, 2011 at 9:49 AM

    the title
    the simple lines
    and the pict at the bottom
    superb :)

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  6. MarijkeAugust 20, 2011 at 9:05 AM

    Simple words. strong words.
    The perfect way to show ur bond with ur sweet girl.
    the words are cming out of the heart
    wow...good work Divy

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  7. marthaAugust 23, 2011 at 4:25 AM

    to be fair.. i think this is best read to your husband. hahaha.. :D

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  8. DivooAugust 23, 2011 at 9:39 AM

    @martha: haha! well, i do agree to that.. but then, in the current situation, this poem completely suits San more than my husband :D

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